The clock struck 8, the metro arrived. Hastened down the stairs, just made it inside!
Found a spot to stand, in the fetid crowd. The train speeded up, announcements were loud!
Same old men’s coach, had people a lot. In came a chick…. God!!! She was hot !
Gaping at damsels, that’s not my style. Yet stole a look, at the face with no smile!
Traveling in men’s coach, alone stood the lady. The cute round face, had the innocence of a baby!
Stared and stared, i stared like an ass. Lost in her world, was the gorgeous little lass!
A tiny piece of conversation, I so wanted to seek. Out of nowhere a teardrop, rolled down her cheek!
I walked towards her, couldn’t see her cry. Gathered all my courage, waved a friendly ‘HI’ !
Wiping away her tears, she gave a mirthless smile. Gorgeous she looked… DAMN! I dropped my file!
Depressed and scared…. standing in the fug. All I wanted was, to give her a tight hug!
My heart started pounding, at a very fast rate. Lord! What should I do? Next station- Kashmiri Gate!
Doors opening on left, crowd began to perish. Alas! She was leaving, not a moment to cherish!
Going…Going… she had gone far away. Someone ask my heart, which wanted her to stay!
Was it inevitable? Or was it fate? Had I just met, and lost my soul-mate?
Now entered a white-haired, along with his daughter. I swear by my Xperia, this one was definitely hotter!!!
–
Anuj Narang
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5 Responses to that chick in men’s coach
Hahaha… Boy will be boys..
But very well put…. Hilarious..
Priyanka Grover
November 23, 2011 at 12:56 pm Reply
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Hahaha… Boy will be boys..
But very well put…. Hilarious..
Priyanka Grover
November 23, 2011 at 12:56 pm
anwesha
November 23, 2011 at 1:48 pm
Hilarious last line
, loved it.
Sourav
November 23, 2011 at 8:15 pm
Well Anuj, This is what we called “Extremely Amusing”
Awesome man, Hats off!
Rehaan
November 24, 2011 at 11:38 am
thank you all!
anuj
November 25, 2011 at 9:47 pm